Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable Corrected Sentence 1: The Titanic carried more than 1,500 people to their graves, despite the beliefs that it was unsinkable
Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land Corrected Sentence 2: The student teacher arrives next week, and it is necessary that we finish reading Eliot's long poem "The Waste Land".
DOL 26
Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly Corrected Sentence 1: Many well known writers submit articles and stories to the Atlantic Monthly, a renowned magazine.
Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library Corrected Sentence 2: "I am very eager to read the French novel, The Plauge," Carmen said, "but it's not in our library."
DOL 27
Sentence 1: everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations Corrected Sentence 1: Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance, therefore, we must all raise funds for the decorations.
Sentence 2: having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner Corrected Sentence 2: Having worked for eight hours, I had to sit down, listen to music, and enjoy a good dinner.
DOL 28
Sentence 1: i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet Corrected Sentence 1: I remember when my neighbor set up a huge telescope that was the largest I had ever seen
Sentence 2: ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing
DOL 33
Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library
Sentence 2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified
Corrected Sentence 1: When are these books due,Hans? Should I bring them to the library?
Corrected Sentence 2: After the Constitutional Convention of 1787 drafted the Constitution of the United States, almost three years before it was ratified.
Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable
Corrected Sentence 1: The Titanic carried more than 1,500 people to their graves, despite the beliefs that it was unsinkable
Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land
Corrected Sentence 2: The student teacher arrives next week, and it is necessary that we finish reading Eliot's long poem "The Waste Land".
DOL 26
Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly
Corrected Sentence 1: Many well known writers submit articles and stories to the Atlantic Monthly, a renowned magazine.
Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library
Corrected Sentence 2: "I am very eager to read the French novel, The Plauge," Carmen said, "but it's not in our library."
DOL 27
Sentence 1: everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations
Corrected Sentence 1: Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance, therefore, we must all raise funds for the decorations.
Sentence 2: having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner
Corrected Sentence 2: Having worked for eight hours, I had to sit down, listen to music, and enjoy a good dinner.
DOL 28
Sentence 1: i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet
Corrected Sentence 1: I remember when my neighbor set up a huge telescope that was the largest I had ever seen
Sentence 2: ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing
DOL 33
Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library
Sentence 2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified
Corrected Sentence 1: When are these books due,Hans? Should I bring them to the library?
Corrected Sentence 2: After the Constitutional Convention of 1787 drafted the Constitution of the United States, almost three years before it was ratified.